Sundowning (was Isolation)

[Mark A Becker]

Hey Tim-
good to see ya in

Isolation

For surprisingly little cost
you can vastly increase
the voices curled
inside the empty chambers
of the revolver pointed at your head.

Merely synchronize the sinking sun
with your diminishing heartbeat
and erase the red music 
at the edges of the flesh
until there is no horizon.

So easy anyone can do it.

As you can see, I cut out the middle of the poem, and moved a line to the end. 

Ya got some great little surreal images/lines:
"For surprisingly little cost you can vastly increase the voices..."  "erase the red music..." 

Somehow, it makes perfect sense- I guess lost minds are like minds...

Thanks for this one,
Mark