Balanced Polarities

[TranquillityBase]

I lost you in the second stanza.  I am lousy at rhyme, but it does feel like, in that second stanza, the rhyming is driving the poem, rather than your intended meaning.  The poem is interesting enough that I want to know what you are getting at.  Second stanza also seems a good deal more abstract (at least the first 6 lines) than the first, also diffusing your meaning.

All that said, enjoyed the promise of the poem.

TqB