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Balanced Polarities
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01-13-2022, 07:24 PM
My feedback would be to make the lines more intelligible, and drop the forced rhymes.
It’s very difficult to follow what’s being said, and the artifice is apparent. This might help: http://www.firesides.ca/poemtips.htm |
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Balanced Polarities - by DragonBlue - 01-13-2022, 07:09 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by busker - 01-13-2022, 07:24 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by TranquillityBase - 01-13-2022, 11:00 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by DragonBlue - 01-14-2022, 05:17 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Mark A Becker - 01-15-2022, 06:23 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Xlateralus - 01-18-2022, 02:13 PM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by DragonBlue - 01-20-2022, 07:12 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Mark A Becker - 01-20-2022, 07:57 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by CRNDLSM - 01-24-2022, 03:09 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by rowens - 01-28-2022, 09:36 AM
RE: Balanced Polarities - by Semicircle - 03-10-2022, 02:58 AM
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