Who Am I?

[DragonBlue]

A review for:  Who Am I? by Savannah

Style: Poetry - Free Form

How it made me feel/what it made me think of:
I like how whimsical this write is.  And then gets somewhat serious towards the end as in; 
"I am a castle of dreams, slave to failure,"  but are we not all a slave to failure for that is how
we succeed in our dreams. 

Structure Challenges:
I saw none.  As I read your pen, I found myself smiling from beginning to end, and there were
no spelling or typing errors.  This being a free form, there was no meter or rhyme to look for.

Overall Impression:
(only my opinion)  There was so much optimism in the ending stanza, that I laughed aloud. 
Write on Savannah, write on!