Days departed

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Days departed

Do you recall
the days departed,
time’s flotsam 
dropped in the drink?
I like the alliteration, haven't seen flotsam in a while
In the breakers hear I feel like something's not right here, comma after breakers perhaps?
at night, incanted,
distant songs 
the sirens sing?

The roots run deep off topic but roots don't normally go more than three feet underground, they mostly spread out and wrap up with other roots. The expression though is timeless there's no problem
of what we planted,
but the bole withers,
the fig tree shrinks.

Young love’s moon
still shines enchanted,
but you and I 
aged in a blink.the moon as an eye is neat idea, it's got a slow blink.