01-09-2022, 11:04 PM
"There is very compelling imagery throughout this. I'm stumbling through the grammar and I'm not sure if that's what I like about it."
I want to second C. on his opening observation and address his last thought. It is written in what almost seems like a different dialict of English and that awkardness is so consistent I hate to see it corrected because that is part of the power of this poem.
I want to second C. on his opening observation and address his last thought. It is written in what almost seems like a different dialict of English and that awkardness is so consistent I hate to see it corrected because that is part of the power of this poem.