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The Scented Candle

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01-09-2022, 08:14 AM

(01-08-2022, 12:43 AM)Torkelburger Wrote: The Scented Candle

warm feelings rest
beside

a scented candle
flame

licking the chilled
air

behind an open
book

I like “licking the chilled air”
Agree with Tiger on the apostrophe. A flame itself has no scent

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The Scented Candle - by Torkelburger - 01-08-2022, 12:43 AM

RE: The Scented Candle - by Tiger the Lion - 01-08-2022, 11:03 PM

RE: The Scented Candle - by busker - 01-09-2022, 08:14 AM

RE: The Scented Candle - by Torkelburger - 01-12-2022, 04:14 AM

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