12-24-2021, 10:30 AM
Enjoyed the subject matter and the googling rabbit hole it inspired. You've got a good amount of specific details for a short piece - and a nice balance of language to keep those details from reading as dry. A poem shouldn't feel like science class and I think you negotiated that nicely here. I'm glad you posted in Misc. because I feel as though an edit would just nibble away at its charm. I like it as it is.
Thanks for posting, Mark.
Thanks for posting, Mark.
