The Turtles and the WEBB
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Enjoyed the subject matter and the googling rabbit hole it inspired. You've got a good amount of specific details for a short piece - and a nice balance of language to keep those details from reading as dry. A poem shouldn't feel like science class and I think you negotiated that nicely here. I'm glad you posted in Misc. because I feel as though an edit would just nibble away at its charm. I like it as it is.
Thanks for posting, Mark.
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The Turtles and the WEBB - by Mark A Becker - 12-23-2021, 06:38 AM
RE: The Turtles and the WEBB - by Truerenigma - 12-24-2021, 12:30 AM
RE: The Turtles and the WEBB - by Tiger the Lion - 12-24-2021, 10:30 AM



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