Disassembling Marconi

[Beowulf]

Hi Sapphire,

Thanks for stopping by to consider this. I'm glad that you found some redeeming qualities inherent to the poem. Your in-line notes are much appreciated. 

Cheers


Hi River Notch,

Thanks for the close scrutiny. Poems are ofttimes allergic to being put under the bright piercing strobe light of the critic. This pome being no exception to that rule. The main reason why I posted it here is to get exactly the kind of feedback that I'm getting. Furthermore I wanted to see if it would be accepted as is or if the reader wanted more detail. Thanks again for your input. Much appreciated.


Regards,

Beowulf