10-26-2021, 10:12 AM
Out at sea we could discern great ships
huge trays loaded with stacked pyramids
of multicolored concentrated Cargo
like the toy interlocking plastic bricks
some of us had ordered
but did not receive.
This is my favorite stanza; it has some really satisfying imagery.
Overall this is a really cool concept for a poem!
You could make a whole book based of this, if there already hasn't been one.
huge trays loaded with stacked pyramids
of multicolored concentrated Cargo
like the toy interlocking plastic bricks
some of us had ordered
but did not receive.
This is my favorite stanza; it has some really satisfying imagery.
Overall this is a really cool concept for a poem!
You could make a whole book based of this, if there already hasn't been one.