Insomnia
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(10-21-2021, 09:27 AM)RiverNotch Wrote:  I dream the same, but now I treat
the ones where I am loved by one
who loves me like how I love them. ….. this line doesn’t scan well. “Like I love them xxxx” fits the meter better 

as nightmares. How am I to sleep
knowing that I might have to run …. Can lose the ‘that’
chased by a beast just out of frame
or chasing one who sublimates ….’after’ instead of ‘chasing’?
the moment sunlight strikes my face?
The dilemma isn’t convincing enough
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Insomnia - by RiverNotch - 10-21-2021, 09:27 AM
RE: Insomnia - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 10-21-2021, 10:24 AM
RE: Insomnia - by busker - 10-21-2021, 01:22 PM
RE: Insomnia - by RiverNotch - 10-21-2021, 10:20 PM
RE: Insomnia - by rowens - 02-13-2022, 06:22 PM



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