10-21-2021, 01:22 PM
(10-21-2021, 09:27 AM)RiverNotch Wrote: I dream the same, but now I treatThe dilemma isn’t convincing enough
the ones where I am loved by one
who loves me like how I love them. ….. this line doesn’t scan well. “Like I love them xxxx” fits the meter better
as nightmares. How am I to sleep
knowing that I might have to run …. Can lose the ‘that’
chased by a beast just out of frame
or chasing one who sublimates ….’after’ instead of ‘chasing’?
the moment sunlight strikes my face?

