Tristesse, v 1.1
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Thanks for the read. Slight edit per busker's note on line 23. I agree with Alex that the title needs to be changed, I'm just not sure to what. Spoiler ahead.
The thread was originally titled "Guilt", but at the last minute I changed it to something a little less on the nose -- perhaps too off the nose. The "Tristesse" here (such an interesting and weirdly underused word, tristesse) is specifically Post-coital tristesse, but as noted that reference is too soft or oblique to work.
Suggestions for a new title, as per the spoiler -- again, read it at yer own risk xD -- are humbly solicited.
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Tristesse, v 1.1 - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2021, 06:21 PM
RE: Tristesse - by busker - 10-13-2021, 07:59 PM
RE: Tristesse - by RiverNotch - 10-16-2021, 03:32 PM
RE: Tristesse - by alonso ramoran - 10-18-2021, 04:03 AM
RE: Tristesse - by RiverNotch - 10-19-2021, 04:54 PM
RE: Tristesse, v 1.1 - by Miley - 12-26-2021, 04:05 PM



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