10-18-2021, 10:22 PM
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Hi Mark,
not sure the added |(doggie) details have improved the piece, it's a much more sentimental read not and losing the 'half-hearted faith' has really weakened it, for me.
- Buck is black (with a white tie), later he has a 'graying snout'. I'm presuming a German Shepherd, which isn't really a 'big bear of a dog' (or are they?)
- It's an early autumn evening (or possibly an early evening in autumn) and the oak branches are 'moonlit' by a 'rising' 'crescent moon'
- We know he's a dog, why 'furry'?
- Why would you think his teeth 'menacing'?
- What answer did you get? Was it In Dog We Trust?
Best, Knot
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Hi Mark,
not sure the added |(doggie) details have improved the piece, it's a much more sentimental read not and losing the 'half-hearted faith' has really weakened it, for me.
- Buck is black (with a white tie), later he has a 'graying snout'. I'm presuming a German Shepherd, which isn't really a 'big bear of a dog' (or are they?)
- It's an early autumn evening (or possibly an early evening in autumn) and the oak branches are 'moonlit' by a 'rising' 'crescent moon'
- We know he's a dog, why 'furry'?
- Why would you think his teeth 'menacing'?
- What answer did you get? Was it In Dog We Trust?
Best, Knot
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