this is not a poem
#6
I have to agree with CRNDLSM in that a "lifetime " by almost any definition is not an "eternity ." Your idea might be better served by putting a lifetime in its proper place, eternity next.
The idea is fine, but has its kinks.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 01:19 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by rowens - 10-13-2021, 07:16 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by CRNDLSM - 10-13-2021, 07:22 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 07:56 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by rowens - 10-13-2021, 07:26 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 07:35 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by Tiger the Lion - 10-13-2021, 07:35 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by rowens - 10-13-2021, 07:40 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 08:04 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by DragonBlue - 01-13-2022, 06:00 PM
RE: this is not a poem - by CRNDLSM - 10-13-2021, 07:57 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 12:16 PM
RE: this is not a poem - by rowens - 10-13-2021, 08:11 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 08:17 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by rowens - 10-13-2021, 08:19 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-13-2021, 08:22 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by TranquillityBase - 10-13-2021, 08:50 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by busker - 10-13-2021, 01:28 PM
RE: this is not a poem - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2021, 06:02 PM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 04-12-2022, 04:51 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by CRNDLSM - 10-13-2021, 11:33 PM
RE: this is not a poem - by Mark A Becker - 10-16-2021, 06:59 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by alonso ramoran - 10-17-2021, 02:24 AM
RE: this is not a poem - by CRNDLSM - 10-17-2021, 10:36 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!