10-11-2021, 05:56 AM
Great title. And I absolutely love:
Nuerons crackle like pop rocks in water.
This is a truly awesome, non-abstract, easy-to-visualize line.
My recommendation is to try to make your poem full of ONLY lines of that quality.
Nuerons crackle like pop rocks in water.
This is a truly awesome, non-abstract, easy-to-visualize line.
My recommendation is to try to make your poem full of ONLY lines of that quality.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson