Robotics
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(10-09-2021, 10:42 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  Of course, plants and animals are just minerals with extra steps xD
I feel like it could be pithier -- afaik 5-7-5 is just a nice plus in English haiku/senryu, since English is not as pithy a language as Japanese. "Minerals win" for the ending, and something less redundant for the first line. Nice work though

Though I just thought of a sly variation.

Three-sided war:
plant, animal, mineral---
viruses win.
Oh!  Good one.  Viruses stand apart from the plant and animal kingdoms... maybe they were already mineral.  Though I would not want to insult them by suggesting it...
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Robotics - by dukealien - 10-07-2021, 09:59 PM
RE: Robotics - by Mark A Becker - 10-09-2021, 02:12 AM
RE: Robotics - by dukealien - 10-09-2021, 03:42 AM
RE: Robotics - by Mark A Becker - 10-09-2021, 06:29 AM
RE: Robotics - by busker - 10-09-2021, 06:42 AM
RE: Robotics - by RiverNotch - 10-09-2021, 10:42 PM
RE: Robotics - by dukealien - 10-10-2021, 10:38 AM



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