Watt's Reply

[Mark A Becker]

I think I am mainly communicating with myself, in a language that I enjoy.  I've thrown off all thought of an audience.  And I find that very liberating.

Then why post it?  I can understand how it’s liberating, yet really prefer your work that offers lines that connect you to readers.

I ain’t trying to pigeon-hole you to any style, Tim, but I do wanna say that your growing command of descriptive language would fall easier on my eyes if you gave a wee bit of consideration to your “adoring fans.” (Thought I’d slip that last bit in to encourage you away from obscure writing.)

Mark