Golden showers
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(10-03-2021, 07:04 AM)Kerbonzo_beenz Wrote:  Glinting off the waterfall above,
is the morning suns warm glow.
charging the water with energy of a new day
so it can sustain the creatures below.

And to think, 

it comes from a penis.
Dirty poems are as difficult to write well as any other. This reads clumsy and rushed. It's a no from me.
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Golden showers - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 10-03-2021, 07:04 AM
RE: Golden showers - by Tiger the Lion - 10-03-2021, 08:26 AM
RE: Golden showers - by busker - 10-03-2021, 08:39 AM
RE: Golden showers - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 10-03-2021, 10:06 AM



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