09-27-2021, 10:49 PM
(09-27-2021, 09:46 PM)ISawASpaceship Wrote: The context of this poem is that I was depressed and wanted to commit suicide. The owner is God, hence the capital H in "He." The whisper that made it's way into the room was coming from the first box, it breathing it's final words is the last thing it says before committing suicide. The first box represents the woman, the second her lover. Yggdrasil is the world tree in Norse mythology. It holds all of the worlds. In real life there is a special tree that Westley and I share. He calls it the Sagan tree. I assume something about Carl Sagan but I digress. It was written more for catharsis. I'd never actually send it to him because he'd probably figure it out and freak out and that was not the goal of things.Maybe capitalize "owner" too, but I think some more descriptive noun would clue us in better
Maybe "our Yggdrasil" at the end