Covering My Wounds

[rowens]

Long strokes of red
run up and down my arms and legs



.......These two lines.......


The next long partstanza is full of brainstorming. It's a list of possible directions to go.
I say, cut out all of it, and work around the edges of the content.

Flesh carries a spotted, purple hue
from the beatings
that were self-inflicted
as injury gave way to pain
and pain gave way to pleasure
because the pain meant
that I didn't have to feel
while I wailed at God
but only from within,
a cry of anger
emanating from my spirit,
as I interrogated my Creator.
I resolved to rouse an answer from the Maker
of the moon
and the stars,
the one who knows everything,
the one who could tell me why my life is this way
but no answer He gave,
as I raved,
and I finally
gave up the conflict,
rising from my place,
where I made my way to the bedroom
and I looked for a hoodie
to cover the marks.

The search 
reminded me of the hoodie that I used to own,
one that I dearly miss,
but it's not really the hoodie, itself,
that I miss.



Be direct, exclusive, particular, hard and fast, and describe the scene with what physical details and emotions are in the scene.