09-26-2021, 03:41 AM
HA! Thanks ISAS-
Indeed a fun little piece.
Finding a quicker way to hit that killer ending would make it stick like an arrow in my right eye socket.
An opponent charges forward something other than "an opponent" , perhaps "apparition"
and the man dodges,
shooting a single arrow
aiming for its backside. slight edits
The adversary lets out a final yell,
as the arrow meets it's mark I laugh
aloud, because it must be humiliating
to die from taking an arrow to the butt
"Here lies a master vampire"
not even fortunate enough
to be given a name,
who will probably be looted
after he was slain,
Oh, how I pity his poor soul
but at least I wear his garments now.
Mark
Indeed a fun little piece.
Finding a quicker way to hit that killer ending would make it stick like an arrow in my right eye socket.
An opponent charges forward something other than "an opponent" , perhaps "apparition"
and the man dodges,
shooting a single arrow
aiming for its backside. slight edits
The adversary lets out a final yell,
as the arrow meets it's mark I laugh
aloud, because it must be humiliating
to die from taking an arrow to the butt
"Here lies a master vampire"
not even fortunate enough
to be given a name,
who will probably be looted
after he was slain,
Oh, how I pity his poor soul
but at least I wear his garments now.
Mark