Alone
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I can relate to the feeling of people leaving me behind, it's a truly traumatic thing even when people intend to do good with it.

Personally I liked it the way that it was. I very much liked the static til dawn. Sometimes melodrama is feeling and people don't want dry warn out poetry written from the hand of a person who has no experience in the scene being talked about. People want the feeling. Just a thought.
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Alone - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 08-20-2021, 03:11 PM
RE: Alone - by ISawASpaceship - 09-25-2021, 05:42 PM
RE: Alone - by busker - 09-25-2021, 06:45 PM



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