Translation [not mine ;) please critique]

[billy]

This poem isn't mine, it's my sister's. She asked me to post so she could get some feedback. (maybe i could convince her to join) She says thanks in advance for the comments

Translation

Comprehension is a key
(one of many)
Transparent
Evanescent
between us

Although

We have an understanding
A keyhole of words
actions
windowed eyes

Through which definitions
defy and promise
meaning despite
the density of the
damning doors

and your feedback would be...