Running the Trot Line
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I rewrote this as, maybe, a prose poem, taking Knot's suggestions into account in the process, and hopefully providing a more interesting ending.

I've never understood the dividing line (if there is one, and I personally suspect there is not) between poetry and prose.  But I did enjoy the freedom that this approach gave me.

TqB
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Running the Trot Line - by TranquillityBase - 09-15-2021, 10:54 PM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by Knot - 09-16-2021, 12:08 AM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by TranquillityBase - 09-16-2021, 07:43 AM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by Knot - 09-16-2021, 10:31 PM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by busker - 09-16-2021, 06:12 AM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by TranquillityBase - 09-17-2021, 10:01 PM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by Knot - 09-17-2021, 11:07 PM
RE: Running the Trot Line - by TranquillityBase - 09-18-2021, 08:59 AM



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