Under the dreaming eyes (Edit 1.0)

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Under the dreamy eyes 

Under the dreamy eyes   maybe "dreaming eyes"; I know it changes the meaning quite a bit, but dreamy....maybe too predictable
of my love, I slept 
away the days and months, tomorrows
that went in a whisper.
Her familiar smell
and hair fringing a fairy circle       this line break doesn't seem necessary
on my face -                                
these and more, I miss today     would like to hear more about her, rather than just "more"
on the purple hill, its sad sun’s rays    may be first time I've seen the word purple in a poem and liked it   great contrast with sun
dying into darkness. Wherever you are,
my love, I pray it is light.

Pig Pen needs more love poems.  Thanks for this one.