6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month

6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month

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09-02-2021, 02:33 PM

(09-02-2021, 10:41 AM)dukealien Wrote: Overdue

Fly circling just out of reach
in my stuffy rent-due room...
the report will scare him
then he’ll land for a first taste
to begin the party.

First time I ever will
have drawn a crowd.

Love this.
The use of "drawn" is perfect Thumbsup

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6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by CRNDLSM - 09-01-2021, 08:11 PM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by TranquillityBase - 09-01-2021, 10:35 PM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by CRNDLSM - 09-02-2021, 05:23 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Quixilated - 09-02-2021, 05:51 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by dukealien - 09-02-2021, 10:41 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2021, 02:33 PM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by dukealien - 09-03-2021, 03:40 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2021, 02:22 PM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Kingsausage1778 - 09-05-2021, 02:08 PM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by CRNDLSM - 10-01-2021, 09:14 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Mark A Becker - 10-01-2021, 10:25 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by busker - 10-01-2021, 11:30 AM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Kerbonzo_beenz - 10-01-2021, 12:09 PM

RE: 6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Semicircle - 02-25-2022, 03:15 AM

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