08-30-2021, 10:53 PM
This is great, just experienced this with an 'excuse me', I love the middle sections quotations, then slight delay, I would probably change 'mailbox complex' I think I get it what it is, but it might sound better as 'collective' applied to apartments, hotels, condos, just an idea. The 'anothrr man' at the beginning adds a different dynamic to the poem being gender specific, I wonder how two women at the mailbox might behave didferently
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