The Artists' Sentence
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(08-26-2021, 05:12 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  The 2 instances of knowing/know are also bugging me. I think I may have tried "discern" at some point and may go back to it. I'm going to do some juggling and return.
I think Todd's economical, cut it, has merit (though I like the way the repetition made me consider the different 'ways' of knowing, including the Biblical). Just a passing thought, perhaps 'charcoal' for 'pencils'?


Best, Knot.


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The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 02-14-2018, 06:42 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by tectak - 02-14-2018, 08:55 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 02-15-2018, 03:49 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by vagabond - 02-23-2018, 09:43 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 02-23-2018, 12:51 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 08-25-2021, 06:23 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Knot - 08-26-2021, 01:31 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 08-26-2021, 05:12 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Knot - 08-26-2021, 11:21 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Todd - 08-26-2021, 07:31 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 08-26-2021, 08:05 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Kingsausage1778 - 09-05-2021, 02:21 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 07-28-2023, 06:42 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by TranquillityBase - 07-28-2023, 07:12 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 07-28-2023, 07:19 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Kynaston Levitt - 07-28-2023, 09:24 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Lizzie - 07-28-2023, 08:46 AM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 07-28-2023, 01:01 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by TranquillityBase - 07-28-2023, 08:07 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by brynmawr1 - 07-28-2023, 08:56 PM
RE: The Artists' Sentence - by Tiger the Lion - 07-29-2023, 04:24 AM



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