08-26-2021, 11:21 PM
(08-26-2021, 05:12 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: The 2 instances of knowing/know are also bugging me. I think I may have tried "discern" at some point and may go back to it. I'm going to do some juggling and return.I think Todd's economical, cut it, has merit (though I like the way the repetition made me consider the different 'ways' of knowing, including the Biblical). Just a passing thought, perhaps 'charcoal' for 'pencils'?
Best, Knot.
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