Your Blueberries

[Mark A Becker]

The original was perfect
Why did you change it?

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“New stuff”
“Older food”

Not so great word choices that weeenr there in the original

C'mon busker, there's no such thing as perfect. 

I can agree that “new stuff” and “older food” may not be great word choices, but the revised langugae is more in tune with the way I actually speak.

I'm not so happy with the new title, though, and will probably make a change there. 

That said, I'm a fool for strict syallable counts that give the appearance of no poetic form at all.  Why?  Hell, I dunno- just a quirk of mine.

Thanks for commentings,
Mark