Your Blueberries
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Hello Gerryswo-

I ain't been around much lately, but I do appreciate your comments. I was reflecting on WCW's poem "This Is Just To Say" before I wrote this one, so yer observation is very close: I admire William's style and brevity.

I have revised to a final version after considering the comments of previous folks. The final follows a 5--7-5 line format, since I can never seem to resist such an urge when I revise... Also changed the title, if only because it ...

Thanks,
Mark
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Messages In This Thread
Your Blueberries - by Mark A Becker - 01-26-2020, 12:56 PM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Knot - 01-26-2020, 11:51 PM
RE: Your Blueberries - by bbcashdollar - 01-27-2020, 04:45 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Knot - 08-25-2021, 09:30 PM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Mark A Becker - 01-28-2020, 06:58 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Joshua Smith - 01-28-2020, 11:42 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Camer028 - 01-31-2020, 01:21 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by LSClanton - 04-01-2020, 11:00 PM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Gerryswo - 08-20-2021, 04:54 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Mark A Becker - 08-25-2021, 04:54 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by busker - 08-25-2021, 05:13 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Mark A Becker - 08-25-2021, 05:48 AM
RE: Your Blueberries - by Tiger the Lion - 08-25-2021, 06:31 AM



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