08-25-2021, 04:54 AM
Hello Gerryswo-
I ain't been around much lately, but I do appreciate your comments. I was reflecting on WCW's poem "This Is Just To Say" before I wrote this one, so yer observation is very close: I admire William's style and brevity.
I have revised to a final version after considering the comments of previous folks. The final follows a 5--7-5 line format, since I can never seem to resist such an urge when I revise... Also changed the title, if only because it ...
Thanks,
Mark
I ain't been around much lately, but I do appreciate your comments. I was reflecting on WCW's poem "This Is Just To Say" before I wrote this one, so yer observation is very close: I admire William's style and brevity.
I have revised to a final version after considering the comments of previous folks. The final follows a 5--7-5 line format, since I can never seem to resist such an urge when I revise... Also changed the title, if only because it ...
Thanks,
Mark

