Critique my critique intensive

[rowens]

My coordination skills are fucked. I used to play guitar and other instruments. Now I can't drive, or do many things that involve hand-eye coordination. I know guitar doesn't require hand-eye coordination. I don't have five finger coordination. I'm also a lousy thief.

Do you think when you write? Do you organize? Do you study?
Do you have a singular rhythm that courses through you's songs and your writing?

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Do you have a singular rhythm that courses through you's songs and your writing?

I think the hipsters refer to that coursing as personal style.

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Do you think I think about the poetry I write? You guessed right.
I'm not allowed to post in the Practice Thread. can you not, really?  If it fits the thread I don't see a problem  I understand that. My own wife would 

When there is a yellow bar at the bottom of a post. A bar the color of the yellow when you get a private message. You are not allowed to post in that thread. All of the Poetry Practice threads have that bar for me.
I don't plan on posting there anyway.

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How many songs do I sing along to and know the words? Most.

I like live albums. I get a kick out of people singing their owns songs differently and adlibbing.

Jimi Hendrix, Isle of Wight:

Aint no redneck    gonna put a rope around me

Aint nobody gonna find me  Aint nobody gonna find fuck with me either



Jim Morrison:

Fuck me baby! Fuck her in the ass!

Robert Plant:

Remember laughter