Critique my critique intensive

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Do you think I think about the poetry I write? You guessed right.
I'm not allowed to post in the Practice Thread. I understand that. My own wife would want that distance from me.
What is your goal? Have no goal. Humor? Be humorous and intense.

Do you think that poems you write make sense to you all at once?

Here's some unasked for advice. And this is how famous poets of the past operated revisions over years. : Music.
If it's musical, it means something. You can revise it, words, all you want. The music is what lasts.

How a politician speaks is more resonate than what is said. In politics, that is despicable. In poetry, it is poetry.

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Currently this posted 3 times.
I clicked in and out of it enough times to make it 666.

Then I posted this. 7

I try to comment on every line for intensive, to show how I analyze the process from beginning to end, then a synapse of what I think they're getting at as a whole piece.

I'm longwinded. When I post something, give me breadth. I'm usually not done.

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You have a musical skill/talent Whatever.
Writing poetry, you're coming from an instinct of musicality.
Your mind works that way. You think I haven't noticed?
That is your strength.
You are strong in analysis. I'm not. I'm too forgiving. Analysis plus Music is a Strength in you. It works for You.

Would you like to continue this conversation?
Because I'm Up.