08-19-2021, 09:12 PM
(08-19-2021, 08:48 PM)TranquillityBase Wrote: In your poem in the exercise, what did you do?I tried to keep it quick, conversational, if I 'thought' about it I tried to write a word I wasn't thinking. But then I couldn't help keep a 'format' in mind with repetition and rhyme. I can read my own poem analytically of my own subconscious...
I thought your poem could be workshopped into a good non-surrealist poem, which sparked my question
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