08-14-2021, 07:11 PM
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Hi Micah,
bit of a brutal suggestion, I know, but just stick to the first verse, it does the job rather nicely by itself, I think. Though perhaps add an 'and' to the beginning of the final line. You might also cut the punctuation (since you don't bother with capitals).
Best, Knot
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Hi Micah,
bit of a brutal suggestion, I know, but just stick to the first verse, it does the job rather nicely by itself, I think. Though perhaps add an 'and' to the beginning of the final line. You might also cut the punctuation (since you don't bother with capitals).
Best, Knot
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