Playmob - edit2
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(07-28-2021, 06:03 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Playmob


Looking at some plastic people
made for children, slick and bright;
there is but one format for them
in two sizes, kid and adult
bending only at the waist. It feels clunky but I also think I see it clearly, I'm interested

Each is different, with clothing
painted on its plastic self.  I wouldn't use 'plastic self'
Click-hard beards and hairdos make each I don't know 'click-hard' but I imagine plastic hair pieces that snap on
character a thing apart– plus the repeat of each
molded, shiny work of art.

Heads and hands come in two colors,
pink and brown with dotted eyes:
both smile, characters unaltered
by their faces’ shades assigned a simple switch would be to punctuate the end of this line
at far, sententious factories. And leave this line as a single description like, 'distant, sententious factories' if that doesn't take away from the intentions.
Thanks for sharing!
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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Playmob - edit2 - by dukealien - 07-28-2021, 06:03 AM
RE: Playmob - by busker - 07-28-2021, 06:23 AM
RE: Playmob - by dukealien - 07-30-2021, 09:21 AM
RE: Playmob - by CRNDLSM - 07-30-2021, 09:35 AM
RE: Playmob - edit - by dukealien - 08-02-2021, 05:18 AM
RE: Playmob - edit - by micah3801 - 08-14-2021, 01:47 PM
RE: Playmob - edit2 - by dukealien - 08-15-2021, 04:10 AM



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