Monday Poem
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(07-29-2021, 02:44 AM)Knot Wrote:  .
Hi TqB,
just a thought.

after a long Sunday
of self-inflicted discord
Just before waking
all I remember
is I dreamed a poem ..................... I want a little more detail here
of which one word remains .............. must be a better way of phrasing this Smile
"apple yard"


Best, Knot

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Thanks Knot.  Did a rewrite.  It was "appleyard", which I just googled and it's primarily an English surname.  The only "appleyard" I knew of, before the the dream, was the character in Picnic at Hanging Rock, so I'm guessing the dream's origins lie there.  Maybe I was dreaming of disappearing like those girls.  Or a nightmare about revision  Wink
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Messages In This Thread
Monday Poem - by TranquillityBase - 07-26-2021, 08:30 PM
RE: Monday Poem - by busker - 07-28-2021, 09:39 AM
RE: Monday Poem - by TranquillityBase - 07-28-2021, 08:51 PM
RE: Monday Poem - by Knot - 07-29-2021, 02:44 AM
RE: Monday Poem - by TranquillityBase - 07-29-2021, 05:40 AM



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