A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4

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You have proficiently wrought a western hellscape, tqb. I shuddered upon reading it, and I am not readily moved. I wanted to give you hard-earned superlatives first before I abstract from the whole and give you a more localized critique. Fine work, sir.
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Thanks Brian.  I feel like I have a completed narrative (finally), but look forward to your ideas about the way I told the story.  Thanks for reading.