07-19-2021, 12:41 AM
This poem makes no sense. I genuinely couldn't tell if it was just bad writing, or deliberate trolling.
I shall assume the former.
The only correction I can point out is that 'thou name' should be 'thy name' (that by itself should tell you that the poem is all over the place).
I can't offer any other constructive suggestion. If it's nonsense verse deliberately written as such, it doesn't produce the intended effect.
I shall assume the former.
The only correction I can point out is that 'thou name' should be 'thy name' (that by itself should tell you that the poem is all over the place).
I can't offer any other constructive suggestion. If it's nonsense verse deliberately written as such, it doesn't produce the intended effect.