A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4

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A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4

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07-18-2021, 10:33 PM

(07-18-2021, 04:17 PM)Adam Koan Wrote: The imagery should be telling as if a child perhaps could get it, yet not be cliche at the same time.

Thanks Adam. All of your critque is helpful, but this line especially jumped at me. It registers with me as a good measuring tool for any poem.

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A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by TranquillityBase - 07-16-2021, 09:03 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew - by CRNDLSM - 07-16-2021, 09:36 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew - by Knot - 07-16-2021, 10:44 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew - by Brian Roberts - 07-16-2021, 10:44 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew - by TranquillityBase - 07-17-2021, 09:45 AM

RE: Slumgullion Stew - by Adam Koan - 07-18-2021, 04:17 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew - by TranquillityBase - 07-18-2021, 10:33 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew revised, no more stew - by Brian Roberts - 07-19-2021, 11:56 PM

RE: Slumgullion Stew revised, no more stew - by Knot - 07-20-2021, 12:55 AM

RE: Slumgullion Stew revised, no more stew - by TranquillityBase - 07-20-2021, 02:23 AM

RE: Slumgullion Stew revised, no more stew - by Knot - 07-23-2021, 12:03 AM

RE: Slumgullion Stew revised, no more stew - by TranquillityBase - 07-23-2021, 06:30 AM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by TranquillityBase - 07-24-2021, 11:37 PM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by Brian Roberts - 07-25-2021, 01:17 AM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by TranquillityBase - 07-25-2021, 08:00 PM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by Knot - 07-25-2021, 09:53 PM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by TranquillityBase - 07-26-2021, 06:35 AM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by Knot - 07-26-2021, 08:12 PM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by Brian Roberts - 07-29-2021, 10:35 PM

RE: A Game of Gogol's Bluff, revision no. 4 - by TranquillityBase - 07-30-2021, 08:56 AM

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