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The Strike of Yesterday
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07-12-2021, 05:46 AM
Of course! No worries, you can always edit the post whenever you can to fix it. And sorry if I came off harsh or discouraging; your piece has potential but I feel you just gotta go deeper and experiment a bit more in your next draft but with a sharper sense of purpose and direction.
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The Strike of Yesterday - by Poetry In Motion - 07-11-2021, 01:49 PM
RE: The Strike of Yesterday - by CRNDLSM - 07-11-2021, 08:42 PM
RE: The Strike of Yesterday - by alonso ramoran - 07-12-2021, 12:22 AM
RE: The Strike of Yesterday - by Poetry In Motion - 07-12-2021, 01:27 AM
RE: The Strike of Yesterday - by alonso ramoran - 07-12-2021, 05:46 AM
RE: The Strike of Yesterday - by Poetry In Motion - 07-13-2021, 01:03 PM
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