Guadalupe River Haiku - edit

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Young hawks cry hunger
abandoned like the full moon
they mutter and sigh.

I'm trying to match in my head the phrase I'm reading with your background and description, and what I'm left with is wondering how the moon is motherless, or could mutter and sigh, 'like' the Hawks.  I think the motherless moon is what you really want to describe but I'm not getting it from the Hawk description.  I think youre close.

Young hawks cry tonight
abandoned to star and sky
and motherless moon.