Guadalupe River Haiku - edit
#1
Young hawks cry hunger.
Abandoned like the new moon,
their plaint cuts the night.



v. 2
Young hawks cry hunger.

Abandoned like the full moon,

they mutter and sigh.



v. 1

Young hawks cry tonight

abandoned to star and sky

and motherless moon.



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Guadalupe River Haiku - edit - by TranquillityBase - 07-03-2021, 11:06 AM
RE: Guadalupe River Haiku no. 1 - by RiverNotch - 07-04-2021, 01:13 AM
RE: Guadalupe River Haiku no. 1 - by busker - 07-04-2021, 08:05 PM
RE: Guadalupe River Haiku - edit - by CRNDLSM - 07-05-2021, 07:11 AM
RE: Guadalupe River Haiku - edit - by Magpie - 07-14-2021, 08:53 PM



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