06-24-2021, 07:17 PM
It is a cool tune idea. I hear it like a folk anthem, that bounces around. I picture a simple finger picked chords, maybe in the DADGAD tuning.
D: Where I wanna be
G: Heading for the hills
A: Hikin with my dog
D: Where I wanna be ----I'd change up that hook. Think of different phrases to keep the listener on the toes potentially "What I wanna see" with the tune around in the next phrase "where I wanna be"
D: Where I wanna be
G: Down a dirt road
A: I just wanna go
D: Where I wanna be
G: West by God
D: You will find me
A: West by God
D: Where I wanna be -----I want to throw out the same suggestion I made earlier, maybe along the lines of "What I wanna do"
D: Where I wanna be
G: Sittin on the porch
A: Fishin on the pond
D: Where I wanna be ------Maybe "Things I wanna sing"
D: Where I wanna be
G: Walking in the woods
A: Walking by the creek
D: Where I wanna be
G: West by God
D: You will find me
A: West by God ----Maybe take a chance to give the listeners a clue to this metaphor in the song. like "West Virginia is / Where I want to be"
D: Where I wanna be
G: West by God
D: If yer lookin for me
A: Gone west by God
D: Where I wanna be
A (rit): West by God
D: Where I wanna be
I feel like as a song starting the verse and chorus with the same chord (D) is a solid choice. Though what im craving on the surface looking at this song is a bridge or a bridge that sounds like a refrain. Simple is solid, but I feel like all a little spice with a fun bridge that starts with G heck maybe has an E in there.
Love the idea and take every song suggestion with a healthy dose of salt, or sugar. Songs are a fun medium.
D: Where I wanna be
G: Heading for the hills
A: Hikin with my dog
D: Where I wanna be ----I'd change up that hook. Think of different phrases to keep the listener on the toes potentially "What I wanna see" with the tune around in the next phrase "where I wanna be"
D: Where I wanna be
G: Down a dirt road
A: I just wanna go
D: Where I wanna be
G: West by God
D: You will find me
A: West by God
D: Where I wanna be -----I want to throw out the same suggestion I made earlier, maybe along the lines of "What I wanna do"
D: Where I wanna be
G: Sittin on the porch
A: Fishin on the pond
D: Where I wanna be ------Maybe "Things I wanna sing"
D: Where I wanna be
G: Walking in the woods
A: Walking by the creek
D: Where I wanna be
G: West by God
D: You will find me
A: West by God ----Maybe take a chance to give the listeners a clue to this metaphor in the song. like "West Virginia is / Where I want to be"
D: Where I wanna be
G: West by God
D: If yer lookin for me
A: Gone west by God
D: Where I wanna be
A (rit): West by God
D: Where I wanna be
I feel like as a song starting the verse and chorus with the same chord (D) is a solid choice. Though what im craving on the surface looking at this song is a bridge or a bridge that sounds like a refrain. Simple is solid, but I feel like all a little spice with a fun bridge that starts with G heck maybe has an E in there.
Love the idea and take every song suggestion with a healthy dose of salt, or sugar. Songs are a fun medium.
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