Where I Wanna Be
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(06-21-2021, 05:23 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Thanks Knot, but this one is already out there, and only shared on MISC as a 'done song'.  The repetition may read strange, but it sure sounds right.  It's a simple song, not a poem.

Too bad you weren't hangin out with me and the boys when this one went around the horn, because that would have given you a chance to weigh-in, in the moment.  Messing with 'butt simple' is most often a foolish endeavour, and I'm "where I wanna be" with this one.

Since I got this mutt home, my wife, son, and daughter-in-law have gotten attached to it.  So, as long as they're keen to it, I'm lettin it be.

(ps- If this were a poem then I'd be much more open to changes, but it ain't, so I'm not- at least not yet, Knot.)

...Mark
Hey Mark, you and I have had this conversation before about "once it's out there", so I absolutely respect that. My nit is that without you first telling us about a trip to VA, there's no real context to decipher "west by God" I wonder if you could do something with the title and still preserve the song exactly as it is? 

... I have a vacation day tomorrow so I'm gonna take a shot at this. 3 chords is my zone.  Thumbsup
Paul

Edit: I've since googled west by God, but I was prompted more by the comments than the content of my first few reads.
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Messages In This Thread
Where I Wanna Be - by Mark A Becker - 06-20-2021, 02:32 AM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by TranquillityBase - 06-20-2021, 04:58 AM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Mark A Becker - 06-20-2021, 09:58 AM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Knot - 06-20-2021, 08:52 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Mark A Becker - 06-21-2021, 05:23 AM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Tiger the Lion - 06-23-2021, 12:15 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by RiverNotch - 06-23-2021, 12:19 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Erthona - 06-21-2021, 06:18 AM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by RiverNotch - 06-22-2021, 01:13 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Mark A Becker - 06-22-2021, 08:47 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by RiverNotch - 06-22-2021, 09:37 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Mark A Becker - 06-22-2021, 10:49 PM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by RiverNotch - 06-23-2021, 11:19 AM
RE: Where I Wanna Be - by Bunx - 06-24-2021, 07:17 PM



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