06-22-2021, 01:13 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-22-2021, 01:13 PM by RiverNotch.)
It's a song. I post songs in potd, but at this point I just trust the interested find the original, or a decent cover. This one---any recordings you can grace us with? 
I feel like "I just wanna go / where I wanna be" should be a refrain just before the chorus. Switch out the two "Walkin" lines with a different image + "I just wanna go". And, possibly, slightly change the second line overall so that you're already on the hills, like "Headin up the hills".
Analytical note: why "West by God"? I imagine we're all west *of* God, as he's like the sun to us, but that ain't what you sayin. A cursory interpretation here's God's another direction, like north by northwest, perhaps a sort of transcendent east, but still, why *west*? My leaning-to-the-east mind is puzzled xD I'd love to hear your reason, or *anecdotal* lack thereof
I feel like "I just wanna go / where I wanna be" should be a refrain just before the chorus. Switch out the two "Walkin" lines with a different image + "I just wanna go". And, possibly, slightly change the second line overall so that you're already on the hills, like "Headin up the hills".
Analytical note: why "West by God"? I imagine we're all west *of* God, as he's like the sun to us, but that ain't what you sayin. A cursory interpretation here's God's another direction, like north by northwest, perhaps a sort of transcendent east, but still, why *west*? My leaning-to-the-east mind is puzzled xD I'd love to hear your reason, or *anecdotal* lack thereof