06-21-2021, 02:39 AM
I like the jumps (from "grown and ungrown" to "Established,/strange files.." throughout the poem; I like the flow into the mythological and out again to your voice, somewhat familiar for a moment from your other writings, then, once we get to the stranger's bullet, we are back in the poem; I like the next to last stanza the best. Your familiar voice is back in the last stanza.