The Disappearance

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TranquillityBase,

I notice that this lacks that " rhythmic" quality Dylan Thomas speak of in your sig line. Other than that, this seems a fine nonsense poem.

best,

dale

Do you mean entirely, or something else?  I guess I hear a sing-song quality in a lot of the lines, but it's not consistent.  A kind of bastard rhythm.