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A Requiem for a thought
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06-11-2021, 05:14 AM
Thank you both for your feedback, both for my rhyming in general as for the poem. I see now that I made a typo in the second line, which was meant to say "ensure" not "unsure" (I don't think "to unsure" is even an actual verb), so I don't think "disconcert" is applicable here. Will try to take the rest to heart and edit a bit in the near future.
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A Requiem for a thought - by ZonaIncerta - 06-08-2021, 06:21 AM
RE: A Requiem for a thought - by rowens - 06-08-2021, 06:28 AM
RE: A Requiem for a thought - by TranquillityBase - 06-08-2021, 11:13 AM
RE: A Requiem for a thought - by ZonaIncerta - 06-11-2021, 05:14 AM
RE: A Requiem for a thought - by Bunx - 06-11-2021, 08:03 AM
RE: A Requiem for a thought - by Brian Roberts - 07-13-2021, 11:53 PM
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