06-10-2021, 08:51 PM
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Hi River,
you lose me with 'to vengeance' - I don't know what that means.
Similarly 'to evil things'
(and you don't need either comma in the first four lines).
Best, Knot
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Hi River,
you lose me with 'to vengeance' - I don't know what that means.
Similarly 'to evil things'
(and you don't need either comma in the first four lines).
Best, Knot
.