A Requiem for a thought

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This chord sung in our chorus
With dead notes to unsure us                 what about “disconcert us”?
That the measures towards the clue        “towards the clue” leaves me blank
Render any lyric untrue

There is embellishment in thought
Reverberating through the strings I sought
And in precious, twisted melodies              “precious, twisted” is overdoing it
Away from the music that the world sees    don’t think you need first “the”

Muting the noise of mouths unheard
Straining my ears to ignore the hurt
While the soundless echo of my heart
Resonates with pain while falling apart         “while falling apart” feels too familiar too used

I know I suffer from this condition known as "rithimomania", which is a word I just made up and means I have this annoying, but very persistent need to rhyme in my poems, even if it makes it a lot worse. I am trying to cure myself from this somewhat, but it's a work in progress.

Despite all my nitpicking, I enjoyed the poem.  I am not a fan of rhyme or wasn’t until I read more of it in Pig Pen.  Your rhyming is intense as I think rowers said.  That’s good.  sorry the way this looks i’m having to use a damn phone.